All Comments on 'Above My Paygrade'

by Johnathanonymous

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Diecast1Diecast14 months ago

No, this is nonsense story. A+

IcarusascendingIcarusascending4 months ago

Solid story. At least it was minimal humiliation for the husband

GreyMatter46GreyMatter464 months ago

26 years in the war tells me there isn't too many words of truth in this story, but its fiction anyway. thanks

sdc97230sdc972304 months ago

Scott and Shelly initially present themselves as a dominant wife cuckolding her husband, but in reality, Scott is the one in control and Shelly is a submissive hotwife. The MC figures this out and turns it o his advantage. If the story had continued, the two men would likely have ended up double-teaming her.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

We all wish that could have been us? Just to tell them off would have been nice; to make them do what he did was the ultimate. But was it a loving wife or an FTA?

sbrooks103xsbrooks103x4 months ago

"soldier" isn't capitalized.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

31 years in the service. I agree with greymatter46. Never happen.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Awesome

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Badly done

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Use tags in the future so readers can have some hints and save some time.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Interesting, enjoyable read. I spent 27 years in our military, and yes it could happen! DerMtMan

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

BULLSHIT story

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Ace on a Ace, nicely done for your virgin time submitting. You ruffled some feathers using the Armed forces, even though they are human just like the rest of us, it is after all just a job. Very brave jumping off into this category with this one. Bronze Star is in the mail. But i score you better than that. PS, F@$# the tags ooha

16GaDouble16GaDouble4 months ago

Glad your MC figured it out at the end and did the right thing.

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