Academy Pt. 01

I really love this story. Thank you for reading mind so I could find this one. Feel free to PM me. I love talking to other writers.

thank you for the great feedback Anon and Aragon- part 2 should be posted any minute now!

Great start - looking forward to the continuation of this story...

Excellent start! Little Abbi has learned her first lesson, and obviously has many more to learn. She obviously wants to be a good girl, and lets hope her enthusiasm is not diminished by her first spanking. I think she should revisit Nurse Polk, have her needs dealt with by an adult and then she can get back to being a little girl again. I do think she needs some cuddles and perhaps sitting on Nurse Polk's lap would comfort her.

Looking forward to chapter 2.

Tess- thank you for the great feedback! The Academy is in our world put on for age-play enthusiasts by a fictional secret society of kinksters. Literotica wouldn’t allow the age-play tag on this story. I’m new to the platform and still figuring it out.

Good concept and the story is off to a good start too.

I’ll admit that I lost track during the intro whether or not this is set in alternate version of earth where this is all normal or if it is a specific school of kink set in contemporary US.

The reference to a Daddy Dom was a definite turn off for me, I check the Tags for stories before reading because any Age Play, DD:LG, Incest stories etc are a hard limit of mine.

Including kink specific Tags are likely to attract readers with the same interests as you.

Tess (uk)

I can't wait until she comes back to the nurse for some relief

I think the set up would definitely work just fine for a book. It reads long here on literotica, but for a book, I think it'll fit well.

thanks for the awesome feedback! the setup is because it's a long project, but I get your criticism. I have 8 chapters so far and I'm planning on eventually releasing it as a book. Each chapter after this one gets to the sexy stuff much sooner.

The setup could be trimmed a little. I certainly zoned out during all the scene setting and listing of locations. You could probably accomplish what you need to set the story up with a fraction of that. But the story worked really well once we got to the Nurse's office. Abbie's internal dialogue during her spanking and exam made for a very erotic spanking session.