by femadorer
Your novel is erotic, hot, and very seductive. Stretching out the action instead of a couple paragraphs.
I am an aficionado of this unique series; it started modest, and I understand that you felt the need to let your readers comprehend the basic facts in advance. That made it easy to fathom the sentimental motives of the acting persons, and their reactions.
That this exceptional relationship is 'heating-up' with every chapter raises my excitement :-) Keeps me sweating, and I love it.
Great writing too. Keep it up!
Can't stand poor plot, bad build up, poor grammar and spelling. You hit it all just right.