All Comments on 'Adam's Advertisement Pt. 03'

Oh no!!!! I hope this gets straightened out soon

Thanks for gifting us some more stories !!

Uh oh! Hope it's an old photo

I have to know what happens next omfg!!! Please post soon.

So fucking good! Thanks!

Great catching up with these fellas. Delighted you’ve come back to them. Even if the dialogue…

Wil is a selfish fucking asshole! And Fred is getting misinformed. “He’s known for his loyalty”. That’s horseshit. He told me he kissed someone. Did he tell you it was an ex-dom (a even bigger asshole than Wil) who is lying to his girlfriend but Wil, even knowing, willingly and eagerly went to his hotel, kissed him, held his cock to his face until he got hard and then almost sucked him if Liam hadn’t called to ‘save’ him? He has a tragic past with Matt and the dude before him! He has little self-control but he’d never cheat? Uh right, a call from Adam and he’s his whore again! While this story had very little about how Wil has been spending his time on tour, his track record doesn’t bode well for fidelity to Fred. Fred is way too nice of a guy to have to settle for this disrespect. Only Ollie seemed to really have Will’s number and holds him accountable for past and future actions. I hope the next chapter doesn’t prove that Wil is incapable of being a decent guy who can put his dark uncontrolled past behind him.

This is so great, love your writing! Haha I had to reread the first parts again to get it, but now I'm into it. Thank you so much for continuing this :)

@dnsontn watch it

I actually enjoy the fast paced dialogue and thank you for not changing the POV too frequently. That really throws me off sometimes. Very much looking forward to the next chapter.

Raphael is also my favorite Turtle. So there, Wil XD

Nooo Wil... maybe it's an old picture. I suspect it's Matt being his usual sociopathic self. Ugh.

Ok. So that one Anonymous really needs to calm down. But, then again, if they were simply triggered by their own situation, I (kinda) understand their viewpoint.

This story is so good that I’m confident that, without reading Wil was set up by one of his narcissistic exes. And my money is on Adam who basically called him a worthless whore when he chose Fred and left the hotel. No “selfish fking ah” would feel that guilty over a kiss and *almost bj when they’re not even in an exclusive relationship.And yes, he did admit that the kiss was with a “sort of ex”. The fact that he was tempted by Adam tracks though. As everyone said, he has trouble letting go of relationships. After all, he let Matt use him as a side piece for a year after they broke up. Weak…maybe. Low self esteem… probably. Terrible taste….definitely. But not exactly selfish. Let’s see what Chapter 4 has in store. 🤩