All Comments on 'Add Spice to Taste'

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lc69hunterlc69hunter9 months ago

what a way to add spice

StolennightStolennight9 months ago

It's a very good story, setting itself up for a sequel with Paul the next day.

Small typo you wrote "hangar" instead of "hanger".

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

very very hot and exciting, I certainly would enjoy a similar evening --- if it ever happens, Kudos to a terrific author who knows how to keep the action "cumming" without a lot of useless verbage.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

The perfect way to spice up this marriage? Divorce!! No difference with what they've chosen to do. Why be married if you rely on third, fourth even fifth or sixth individuals for completion

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

That got me very wet!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I can appreciate the story, but I don’t think my wife or I would want to see the other doing the things you wrote about. Admittedly, it sounds exciting, but I don’t think it would be good for the marriage.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Great!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I want a couple to take me home like this.

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As a newcomer to this site, I welcome feedback on my writing, especially comments pertaining to what you liked and disliked about the story. Thanks! Paul J