All Comments on 'Addicted To Our Secret'

by Benji2049

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Eric_BridgeEric_Bridge10 months ago

Woah, this is just... like... leaves me speechless how good you are at this. Did you even have a script or was it all improvised?

Benji2049Benji204910 months agoAuthor

That's very kind of you. I wish I could just rattle this stuff of extemporaneously - that would save me so much time! But no, this was all scripted, just written in a much looser way than previous projects. When I do a narrative, I try to give it a beginning, middle, and end, but after being frustrated with some more straightforward scripts, I decided to just dash this off in a more ambiguous way. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

viola_moonviola_moon9 months ago

You, sir, have a voice that could command the winds and calm the tempest. It's deep, smooth, rich - every syllable you utter is like velvet unfurling in the night, painting the air with shades of enchantment. From the moment I heard you read, I knew I was listening to something truly remarkable. Hanging onto your every word, I was on the edge of my seat, eagerly anticipating what would come next. Your voice, the steady lighthouse amidst a sea of emotions, made me feel like the only listener in the world. It was as if you were reading just for me.

And let me not forget the story itself – the passion, the longing, the emotional ebbs and flows. All of it mirrored my deepest desires, painting a beautiful, resounding tale that touched the core of my being. I am truly in awe of the way you write, the way you tell a story, and the way you bring it to life with your extraordinary voice.

Keep doing what you do. Keep giving life to words, keep guiding us through these magnificent worlds with your voice. I am, as are so many others, eagerly awaiting to hear your next story.

FoxartFoxart3 months ago

That's poetry and it's beautiful. I didn't know I'd find an entry that described intimacy in such a sacred erotic way! Beautiful piece Benji2049!

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