All Comments on 'Addie's Bad Day'

Your last several stories have been way too short. This one has excellent potential. I hope you add chapters.

Sorry to say this is just a sad Situation for Adonna. She sadly needs a lot of Psychological help. And Selbi is just one Sadistic bitch to her sister that just needs help. As far as Zipser goes he just needs a good beating, and maybe his penis cut off, for Betraying Adonna's Confidential secrets to her sister..