All Comments on 'Adele's Valentines'

Loved the story. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Lucky

Very nice start

Oh I absolutely love this, it is so clever! Adele clearly sets up her own fantasy Valentines, might not be what most people think of as romantic, but it made me wet. Love that there are lots of little bits that get turned around at the end, like the joke going to far. I thought it was joking about something inappropreaite, but really it was her thinking she might have given the game away. It is a perfect short.

The plot twist though

Yes .

.a truly high grade story..

Love the alternate Valentines! Girl power!

Oh how I can’t wait to see how this guy slowly starts to assert his dominance and authority over her until she’s totally submissive to him in every way.

Loved it. Like my Club stories.