All Comments on 'Adina's Journey'

... feeble follow through. Why is it that women on Literotica submit so easily to blackmail - Smythe has set himself up for a variety of criminal charges and complete destruction of his career - and Adina simply bends over and takes it

After a strong start, I was disappointed by the direction this took. The introduction of Brian seemed unnecessary and I'd have rather seen Adina drawn into Katy and Michelle's games.