All Comments on 'Adrienne's Duet Pt. 04'

Another well written chapter. These characters are becoming a few of my favorites. Looking forward to another chapter.

I thought Clarissa would have something nasty up her sleeve, I just hadn't figured out what. Every good drama needs a villainous character of some kind (whether mildly unpleasant or downright evil) to balance out the decent protagonist(s) and in Clarissa and the loathsome Randall you've created the perfect partnership. I did spot one typo on page 3---not serious but it looks odd: Adrienne becomes Adrian in once sentence. As I said, not serious. It's still a five-star chapter.

Continued Excellence!

I loved this chapter and how beautifully Juliet's / Adrienne's romance is evolving from friendship to true love.

This is an awe-inspiring story, and please keep writing more chapters🎉!

Definitely A 5*-Star Rated Chapter.

For those that feel the brief exchange having to do with making erotic films is a bit over-the-top, I wholeheartedly agree and am deleting it from the story. I meant to remove it and forgot. Sleeping with Randall is the important theme of that dramatic sequence.

The erotic films exchange was a bit much. I think it's a good decision to edit it. The whole exchange with the mother is a bit soapy, but I guess it's necessary. Less is more with the mother. There would really be no reason to try and repair the relationship at that point.

Story's great as usual but theres something that bugs me. 3 times plus in this chapter alone you named Adrienne "Adrian". I don't know if it was intentional or not but to shorten the name wouldn't it be Adrien and not a guys name? You also called Juliet "Julie" but that could really be a typo. Can we have less of the Adrian please?

Why on earth are they exchanging rings and calling them BFF rings? This just has big 'and they were roommates' energy which is so ridiculous when it's literally a story about them fucking!

Wow. This is *so* not a story about them fucking. It's much more.