All Comments on 'Adult Situations Ch. 65-66'

by SteveWallace

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ag2507ag2507almost 2 years ago

You are walking into a trap of your own making. I know I bitched and moaned an eon ago about keeping up with who's who, but the ever lengthing cast list is, I think, encouraging you to write smaller story segments to the point where that the story is the prologue to the DP. I'm not sure of the solution: maybe parallel uploads. Reference material is a challenge for digital media, even ebooks, so don't be too upset.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

My hero and favorite character and story line.

Insemin8Insemin83 months ago

Great stories, but when the cast lit takes up half the chapter it doesn't really need repeating every chapter!

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...

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