All Comments on 'Advanced Fertility Program Ch. 04'
by MiracleMilk
- 90 Comments
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoGreat to see you back! Hope that Hazel ends up on the end of Brad's dick too
Anonymousalmost 2 years agolove the story line. just wish the author would stop dragging the story out so long and waiting 5 1/2 months between this last chapter is killing me, i almost had to reread the last chapter to remember it. but i still love the story, please speed up a little like the first 3 chapter. dying to read how Ahmad approaches his mother about marriage..
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoLot of world building going on,kinda unexpected for an erotic story. Not gonna lie,was expecting to see more of Bradley-Sadiya. But that's just a personal preference. It's an intriguing story,hope to read more soon.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoPlease end the cycle with Ahmad leading a jihad to install Shari'ah law in America, becoming the Caliph of Earth, making all the female characters of the story joining his harem, and making Brad his eunuch slave. Allahu Akbar.
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Anonymousalmost 2 years agoNo action at all. That was so boring. Part 1-3 was so good and that one was just bad. We need bradley forcing stepmom to sleep with him and with time she starts to like it because she craves big thick cock.
totallyrealalmost 2 years agoGood work! The biggest thing is being consistent. The lack of naughty scenes isn't a problem - good erotica often has more titillation than actual pornography anyway. While the direction of this series seems unclear so far, that's also not a bad thing. A hyper-focused story has a narrow appeal; something that explores most common interests will inevitable shine with a lot more people.
All the best to you.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoYeah, the build up is key to an impactful cuck scene. Gave it 5 stars, even though it's a transition chapter. I hope you continue to update.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoI get it its a very hentai like scenario, but honestly I dont care about ahmad's school life, I get it its to give us more of a slow buildup but still, the strong point is Bradley and the Mother dont go all crazy with more characters like Hazel.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoNad part. Sex scene is missing. Next part: bradley should force her for a bj then fuck her. First she hates it but then she starts to love big cock
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoBradley has to fuck her. She likes it as you teased in the previous chapters.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoHow about Bradley gets kicked out of the situation and the friend Gabriel replaces him as the bully / moms owner
Anonymousalmost 2 years ago"My Mom and I aren't blood related.": instantly lost interest at that point
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoWhat chapter are you up to on SubscribeStar? Your post headers aren't public there so I have no idea.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoHe's gonna take unnecessarily long to upload again, he's killing the story, the interest is going down
Anonymousover 1 year agoChapter 6 is already on patreon , WTF?? Its finished and we poor as fuck waiting
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Anonymousover 1 year agoDon’t waste money on him he hasn’t updated his Patreon in months and refuses to answer messages
Anonykabout 1 year agoThe next two chapters are on subscribestar and they don’t have Brad fucking the mom either. Looks like this is an abandoned story. A shame, as it was on its way to being one of the best. They tried to draw it out to make some money.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoPlease for the love of God update
I am begging you can't take a year to updatr
Anonymousabout 1 year agoSpoiler for my men of culture,
Basically what happens until the 7/8th chapter is, hazel has her heartbroken to hear that Ahmad has to marry his mom. She offers herself for marriage but Ahmad's declines Hazel's offer. (Hazel is never to be heard off again.) Brad comes in Ahmad's house and makes Ahmad massage his smelly feet whilst he touches the moms boobs and fingers her Again. Ahmad tried to Punch Brad but it grazes him, Brad grips him and is stopped by mom. Brad asks for a sloppy kiss in exchange for mistreatment. Mom agrees but is reluctant in the act whilst he gets her to give him a handjob. (,Warning a lot of islamophobia content,) - this will disrespect religion and god,culture and may not be appropriate to some viewers. Ahmad is further humiliated in school and shoved into locker naked and a wedgie to the ceiling. And the story finishes there it's a shame it's an abandened story.
Anonymous5 months agoJeez somebody's really pissed that someone isn't writing a story for free. Get a life, man.
Anonymous5 months agoJeez somebody's really pissed that someone isn't writing a story for free. Get a life, man
Well you shouldn't start a story for free then, plus no updates on his website either
Anonymous3 months agoBro, at this point, you might as well pay the couple dollars and subscribe if you want to read ch. 7. It's not that good, though. That's why no one bothered to save and share it.
And somehow he still has 18 subscribers on his subscribestar. The author figured out the secret to free passive income.
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