All Comments on 'Adventures of a Anal Slut'

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Please learn the difference between “then”, which deals time: (Let’s eat, then go downtown ) and “than” which deals with choices: (I like apples more than pears).

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Only three stars. Careless spelling errors ruined what could have been a good story/ Inexperienced is one word not two and except should have been accept, Smacked bottom!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

OMG you need an editor

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

this is unreadable

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

If the story teller is a recent language, where she learn all thew dirty words. Not believeable.

frenchie71frenchie717 months ago

Wow why do you read these stories anon? I love lost opportunities loose sexy style where meaning, lust and emotions are far more important than spelling and grammar. She’s hot and her works hotter.

My suggestion to you mate, get a life

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

lmfao on reviewers commenting on spelling.

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