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by Amavoyeur
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hindsight2020almost 6 years agoPOV
Right, always tell a story from the the POV of the least interesting person with the lowest stakes in the game. 1*
oldbearswitchalmost 6 years agoWell done. A little different, none of the usual braggadocio, no cucky disrespect
Thank, ignore the haters.
26thNCabout 5 years agoNo different
No different than the other someone other than my husband gathered my bastard.
Amavoyeurover 3 years agoAuthorRight
Thank you to Hindsight2020. You're right about writing from the Point of View of the person who needs the most persuasion. I changed my writing as a result of your comment.
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