All Comments on 'Affair of the Heart'

This is a cheating bitch and bastard story not a romance. Post it right and face the music.

It's a romance if the author thinks so. And I think it's a romance.

I agree with the previous comment. Cheating is cheating. I'm not judging, but this is adultery already, and they are planning more. She called it a 20 year affair in the first sentence of the story. That's what the Loving Wives category is for.

Should be in loving wives. Not romance, agree with other anon, face the music in loving wives, they both deliberately carried on an affair and oh hello our children are together now so lets move on to fucking, after always not meeting for not wanting to hurt their spouses.

Both are cheaters, both have been for 20 years. Feel bad for their unsuspecting loving spouses. Author obviously scared to post where it belongs. Loving Wives. Cheating is cheating. Fingering her at the get together how crass. No respect. Hope it ends here. Don't want to read about their adultrey. Sick

Not a romance at all. Cheating bitch, and bastard. How could they do that to their children? Horrible. This is a loving wife story. When they do it maybe if the author has their spouses hook up and fall in love with each other AND these two have lousy sex and hate it. Ruining 20 yrs of cheating, with their ex's getting married then we may save this garbage.

A slut and an asshole/ horndog how romantic!

turning into in-laws. TK U MLJ LV NV

Yes, it's cheating, but it happens sometimes, even when people think they love their spouses. I don't know much about where it should be catagorized, but the title says Affair, so if these people hate cheating so much, why did they continue reading the story? Because it's a good erotic story. Don't be discouraged by the negative comments. Looking forward to reading more.

I like the story. It is, after all, fiction. Those of you who are so upset, get a life. How can anyone take a fictional character and pour on so much judgement. Come on people. This story is supposed to be fun, not a target for such acrimony.

Chuck from Cincinnati

Where is the romance? Where is the morality. There is neither, its just twisted. 1*

Great suspense: Didn't know if it was going to be a train-wreck or not! Nice segue to the next phase!