All Comments on 'Affairs of the Family'

Needed a score card to keep up with the players. Lost track of who was who and didn’t finish the story.

A wee bit disjointed dialogue, haphazard jumping from scene to scene.

Still good, although the anal scenes did not add to the enjoyment of the story.

This is great. Love full family sex. Getting everyone together is a tricky puzzle that you solved well. The only thing missing is everyone enjoying bisex with everyone else in the family.

You may have had too many characters. The two "M"s could have been only one and nothing would have been lost.

Incest/Taboo is my favorite category to read, and I've written a couple for that category as well. This may seem odd, as I have no sister, my mother was 54 by the time I turned 18, and my parents were pretty strictly in morality of the '40s. And neither of my daughters has ever given even the faintest hint of interest in me that way. But I find the subject attractive, for some reason.

I suspect that, although I think any father that would rape his child deserves to be hung by the balls with piano wire, consensual sex with a loving adult family member may be the safest and most comforting of all.

I'm a huge fan of full family fun. Loved this one.

Absolutely loved the story

I think it's extremely exciting and just wish I could've experienced such things.

please write more Chapter's of this story ......

That story was busy, exciting, and fun. Well done!

Brother and sister identical twins. Only way that could happen is one of a pair (either m/m or f/f) of identical twins had a sex change.