by Samuelx
Why can't you write a decent story? Worst author ever multiplied by 3639. I think you have an undiagnosed disorder, please seek help.
You try too hard to justify your woke story: White loves black and black loves white. I love it too, but you don't need to advertise it.
Same with Black man is bi, and White man is bi. If you want fhe readed to know it, say it once, not twicei n every paragraph.
Too much emphasis on 'Big White this' and 'Big Black that', rather focus on tbe story line.
You'll get better reviews if you spend more time on the quality of the story, than on writing new ones.
I read your work, so far most of it.
It's good, sometimes great and sometimes not so great.
But, you are writing, thank you
I love it. White men are superior and when a white man has a big cock its for black people to worship