All Comments on 'After a Dinner Party'

by jakebarnes33

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
More sordid than erotic

Drugs and booze don't make for erotic sex.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Seemed like a pretty DUMB story to me.

However I didn't read it thourgly as I couldn't get into it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
On the rocks

This marriage is on the rocks, booze, drugs and extramerital sex will kill it. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Quite realistic and believable...

...even if it isn't pretty. It would be interesting to see how everyone feels and reacts when they are sober.

ErotonautErotonautalmost 17 years ago
Sounds like a marriage in its last throes

As the previous reader commented, you've gone for quite a realistic approach. This has slightly diminished the erotic element, but I commend you for taking the path less travelled.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Terrible

This wasn't erotic, it wasn't a story, and it wasn't interesting. Pass it by reader.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Drugs don't make a bad story...

Some of the best sex involves drink and drugs. Not a bad story at all.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Fashionably Unappealing

Writing was quite good but a shame for effort spent on 3 countem 3 quite sick people and a setting without value or arousal. Who's and whats to like for all this effort?<P>

Kind of a waste huh.

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