by jakebarnes33
Writing was quite good but a shame for effort spent on 3 countem 3 quite sick people and a setting without value or arousal. Who's and whats to like for all this effort?<P>
Kind of a waste huh.
Some of the best sex involves drink and drugs. Not a bad story at all.
This wasn't erotic, it wasn't a story, and it wasn't interesting. Pass it by reader.
As the previous reader commented, you've gone for quite a realistic approach. This has slightly diminished the erotic element, but I commend you for taking the path less travelled.
...even if it isn't pretty. It would be interesting to see how everyone feels and reacts when they are sober.
This marriage is on the rocks, booze, drugs and extramerital sex will kill it. Thanks
However I didn't read it thourgly as I couldn't get into it