All Comments on 'After School Delight Pt. 09'

a bit repetitive in later chapters. There was a Sudoku like rotation of personnel, but not a lot of character development.

I try to introduce some alternatives along the way, but the story comes to a dubious climax in Part 11. Stick with it if your sensibility isn't offended :)

Super overload of sex… no story behind…or very little…it’s a pity your writing is outstanding… Macey constantly being denied to remember is getting tiresome…two days marathon sex is a bit unrealistic…you should invest your amazing talents in a bit more sophisticated story plot and character development… I am skipping trough a lot of the same…