All Comments on 'After the Picnic'

This could easily be changed into a boy & girl story just like “The Picnic” and rather than repeat myself I’ll just say my comments are the same. Interesting as to which direction the story will go.

Story was well done. Keep up the good work!!!!!! I look forward to reading more of your stuff.

All the racing/car reference is kinda moot. Filler that really doesn't add to the story. The sex is wonderful.

i could imagine myself being taken that way.