All Comments on 'After the Picnic'

All the racing/car reference is kinda moot. Filler that really doesn't add to the story. The sex is wonderful.

i could imagine myself being taken that way.

Story was well done. Keep up the good work!!!!!! I look forward to reading more of your stuff.

This could easily be changed into a boy & girl story just like “The Picnic” and rather than repeat myself I’ll just say my comments are the same. Interesting as to which direction the story will go.