All Comments on 'After work Sex'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Obviously English isn’t your language

azranger9372azranger9372almost 2 years ago

Good one. Nothing wrong with a real loving wife. Odiouser 's wife is very loving every time weasel sees her.

iammweaseliammweaselalmost 2 years ago

Not well written, but with the trash and utter sewage of late this was a welcome respite.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

English translation could be better

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Not bad but the language barrier is a bit grating

Legio_Patria_NostraLegio_Patria_Nostraalmost 2 years ago

Fresh and welcomed story line!!! 5/5!!!

lc69hunterlc69hunteralmost 2 years ago

These stories are needed to offset the BTB, cuck, IR stuff that we read, not that those aren't enjoyable also, if written well

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Props for not making it all about fetishes or interracial utopian fantasies. You kept it between the wife and the husband she loves. I think the gratuitous description of sex was over the top for me, which knocked it down a star. Also, the grammar and use of language was really off. English most likely isn't your first language. If you continue to write in English, I would suggest finding an editor with good English grammar skills. 3☆

OdiouserOdiouseralmost 2 years ago

Well executed. Scarcely an observable word gaff. But this was my 2nd one in today's "Loving Wives" section that was solely about her loving her husband. You KNOW "loving" translates to "straying" or "lusting" or "fucking around" but NOT for pity's sake for marital sex!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

That was surprising an actual fantasy that doesn’t involve black cocks being a cuck or being a whore. This must be a first for this category.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyalmost 2 years ago

Must not have been too hungry for food!

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