All Comments on 'Against the Odds Ch. 02'

Those who havent read it dont know what they are missing! Those who have and have failed to vote, dont know what the vote's there for.

Those who have read and failed to comment, dont know what a good story is all about!

Well done and keep up the good work...

the premis is great , you are ending the chapters at the right places and the characters are clearly defined . please find an editor or at least a knowledgeable proofreader ! your gramatical errors make a fast paced story a slow read .

You people who won't read in an international perspective make me puke. As if the whole world is meant to revolve around you. Grammar: take a look at your bastardization of English; 'Gotton' for goodness sake. I don't mind - until you are critical. Oh spare me. Just read and get on with it - try to adopt an enlightened mind. If you can't, then go to bed with primer books and be happy. Thank God for Literotica for being a vehicle without prejudices.

Egmont Grigor.