All Comments on 'Ahh Sin City Ch. 02'

Theres SO much in your stories ii like, it makes me not sweat the few things i dont! LOL!

Thank you for the constructive criticism. I’m always looking to improve. Now four years later, I have many new ideas floating around my head which I’d love to put into text for others to enjoy. Sorry for the long break I took.

you have a good talent and know how to write, however i was haveing trouble when it was story within the story where jenny would tell how brian was doing ____" to her while playing got some what confuseing.

Though a bit different, I really liked it as my soaping wet pussy is a proof of that!

This is, without a doubt, one of the best stories on this site. You have a HUGE talent. Thank you for sharing!!