All Comments on 'AI Era: _Automata #06 AI Jenny'

“erotic SciFi heroins” … ???

This a great chapter, just like the previous ones. Though, the beginning was a bit rough as it felt a little disconnected. I understand this is for the challenge is coming up, so things are going to be out of order. However, on it own, without the challenge, I think a bit of exposition at the beginning could have been good.

You’re comparisons have improved, too! I feel like you’ve improved a decent bit from the first chapter! I can’t wait to read more.

The story refers to the main character as "TwoFour" and then switches to "FourTwo", alternating between the two, numerous times. The inconsistency detracts from the story, given that the AI characters are supposedly of a vastly superior intellect. Just an FYI... Otherwise, the story is entertaining.

Yes your right - Dangers of changing character names at the last minute.