All Comments on 'AI Era: Agent AI'

by Duleigh

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krugeranndkrugeranndalmost 2 years ago

This will be continued, yes?

ender2k2kender2k2kalmost 2 years ago

Outstanding. Thank you.

HargaHargaalmost 2 years ago

great story and well written. Had to read it 3 times. It was that good, but lots of unanswered threads left hanging. Hope you plan on tying them off at some point.

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Cheers

DuleighDuleighalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Agent AI- SWAK is in the works!

Ravey19Ravey19almost 2 years ago

Loved the concept of Canada going to the dark side but thought Alicia might have questioned it more. Great story but perhaps too many the ads left open for a sequel. 5⛤

DuleighDuleighalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Yeah, she could have questioned it more, but believe me, when you're busted up bad and laid up, work is a low priority

WhitewaterbumWhitewaterbumalmost 2 years ago

Bravo! Bravo! An excellent written story. The 2/3 of story read like David Balducci thriller. Hope there is sequel😊🙏

Ravey19Ravey19almost 2 years ago

Duleigh,

Apologies, I meant before the mission. I'm surprised Alicia survived anyway. But that's the point of your story.

Secondly, "the ads" was supposed to be "threads". I hope you have plans for Ming's and her revenge in a sequel.

Thanks for taking the time to reply.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great, hope there's lots more to come.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This is better than many of the books I have read over the years. You really nailed this story perfectly with awesome characters and a wonderful plot. I was totally blindsided by Sid setting her up and the part about Q giving a monologue was hilarious yet spot on. I look forward to reading more of Alicia and Ming. Thanks for giving something awesome to enjoy overnight.

J.D.

DuleighDuleighalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you JD. This story actually wrote itself. It was a bit rough at first but once it started to open up, it really began to fly. I had to chop it off at 26K words because I'd still be writing if I didn't. Don't worry about reading more, there's plenty of folks that want nanobots and not all of them are nice.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Your story is worthy of inclusion in a "year's best" anthology or magazine. I'll be looking for part 2. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Interesting read, I have to see the first AI story in the list, that I loved reading. On to the next part...

BuzzCzarBuzzCzarover 1 year ago

First of your work I've read. I'll rectify that soon. Excellent story, very well told. 5*

wwaldripwwaldrip12 months ago

Another excellent story

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Disabled veteran, learning how to live from the sidelines. Still trying to figure out if I'm writing these stories, or if these stories are writing me. I've given them free rein to flow and now it's time to start publishing, The scores reflect that you like what I am publishin...