All Comments on 'AI Era: Breeding Towers - Discipline'

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Dark358Dark3588 months ago

Good grief girl. I'm now thinking there's no limit to the breadth of your imagination and how well you share and express it. You make everything smoking hot. Kudos...

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I liked the main characters attitude, but I do feel like it was a male ego driven story.

If the protagonists was an AI model, (which states that in the end) he certainly didn't act that way. Too much ego mistaken for dominance.

The way you described the protagonists position was confusing if her arms were pulled back. An position like that in an extended period of time + beating could lead to shoulder dislocation.

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