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SirTOshunSirTOshunover 2 years ago

This was dope. The sci-fi elements you used to create the chair were really imaginative. Cheers!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I really enjoyed the first two thirds, but the story went to quickly once she met the squid. After such a good build up, it made it anticlimactic.

bettiezyxbettiezyxabout 1 year agoAuthor

Well...some of us are into tentacles. LOL

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