All Comments on 'AI Robot Pt. 01 - Sexual Awakening'

I didn't finish your story, but I want to offer advice instead of leaving.

1. Break up your paragraphs. I nearly clicked off as soon as I saw the walls of text and I'm positive they will deter other readers.

2. Spelling and sentence structure. The brick walls of text combined with the spelling mistakes and awkward sentences are what made me stop. It doesn't matter how good your story is if your readers can't comprehend it.

These are my main reasons for leaving and I hope my comment is helpful.

Good feedback for the author. In all fairness, your two points of feedback are really only one piece of advice.

Other than that though - I really like the imaginative writing