All Comments on 'Aimee, Hall of Punishment'

Nicely done for a difficult subject. You managed to balance the erotic with the situation pretty well. Of course the horror of someone being kept in a hood and raped for two decades is probably too heavy for any short piece of erotica to really do justice to. I'm interested to see how the next part turns out, presumably as her mind comes back to her is when we as readers start to get insight into how she is coping, what her mechanisms will be. They surely will be fairly out there, assuming she doesn't just curl up into a ball. The only same thing would have been to go mad, so how you'll handle that I've no idea, but look forward to finding out!

Nicely done for a difficult subject. You managed to balance the erotic with the situation pretty well. Of course the horror of someone being kept in a hood and raped for two decades is probably too heavy for any short piece of erotica to really do justice to. I'm interested to see how the next part turns out, presumably as her mind comes back to her is when we as readers start to get insight into how she is coping, what her mechanisms will be. They surely will be fairly out there, assuming she doesn't just curl up into a ball. The only same thing would have been to go mad, so how you'll handle that I've no idea, but look forward to finding out!

Nicely done for a difficult subject. You managed to balance the erotic with the situation pretty well. Of course the horror of someone being kept in a hood and raped for two decades is probably too heavy for any short piece of erotica to really do justice to. I'm interested to see how the next part turns out, presumably as her mind comes back to her is when we as readers start to get insight into how she is coping, what her mechanisms will be. They surely will be fairly out there, assuming she doesn't just curl up into a ball. The only same thing would have been to go mad, so how you'll handle that I've no idea, but look forward to finding out!

Well written and a different way of looking at the theme which I found horrific, intriguing and compulsive. Thanks.