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Enterprise1701AEnterprise1701Aabout 1 month ago
You have a perfectly great story...

... but then you ruin it by having him stick his cock up her ass!! Realy disgusting after that.

pdiddyd55pdiddyd55about 1 month ago

Good first story. Hope that you’re planning a follow up for the martini bar and perhaps a trip to MargoIsland.

I liked the touch of how the leaf was similar in shape to a spade.

hair94hair94about 1 month ago
Great Story!!!

Simply fantastic!!! I hope you plan to write more. 5-Stars!!

swtnlttlswtnlttlabout 1 month ago

Please please please continue this story! You have a way with putting words together that makes me think ahead, only to be wrong!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

a fabulous story. Quite amazing for a first story! Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Overall this was well done. I guess you were a bit too excited writing the sex scenes and you skipped over some little details that would have made the action more coherent (e.g. How did Erica go from having sex by the pool with Caster, to then magically showing up in the shower? Was she teleported?) Still, this was a good one.

ExcaliburXExcaliburX27 days ago

Hot, creative, well written, and so realistic. 5 stars

ExcaliburXExcaliburX27 days ago

Black men and white women so freaking EXPLOSIVE!!

AnonymousAnonymous18 days ago

Oh…please keep going…this really spoke to me. There’s not enough in this genre for women by women.

GcoachGGcoachG17 days ago

Fucking hot!!!!! 5⭐️s!!!

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Mid-thirties woman from Atlanta, GA. I have been a "reader," for the past few years, and decided to put my writing abilities a test. Hope you enjoy.