by subsman
... it would have been even better had it not had a typo in the title ;( !
These things might seem small to you when you're actually writing but they are very important to your readers; if you want to keep them, you will have to try a little harder to satisfy them.
Your from New York. The Burlington Coat Factory Store your talking about is in Five Towns nears JFK Airport it's off a road that leads to the airport. Love the story it was Hot. I came twice. Could have been longer. Can't wait for more to this story to come.