All Comments on 'Airplane Play'

by sexysadie777

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MigbirdMigbird11 months ago

Happy coincidence, indeed. Entertaining piece; could easily imagine on a long international flight. Maybe a "one-off" but would enjoy seeing the two MCs get together in Barcelona.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Good premise.

Much too rushed.

Much too automatic. Needed some reluctance that needed to be overcome.

Needed something with Aliza's body.

Two stars.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Could definitely be a one off but can also see it building into a nice series. Great work either way you go

ClaudiaNClaudiaN11 months ago

Had me squeezing my legs!

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