by sexysadie777
Happy coincidence, indeed. Entertaining piece; could easily imagine on a long international flight. Maybe a "one-off" but would enjoy seeing the two MCs get together in Barcelona.
Good premise.
Much too rushed.
Much too automatic. Needed some reluctance that needed to be overcome.
Needed something with Aliza's body.
Two stars.
Could definitely be a one off but can also see it building into a nice series. Great work either way you go