All Comments on 'Aisuru Shira'

by InkMyChina

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hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyover 13 years ago
Ohhhh

I can tell this is going to be soooo good

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
*****

Five.

angin_berhembusangin_berhembusover 13 years ago
This s good

I like it, u wrote d characters very strongly. I will wait for d next posting.

whatilikeaboutuwhatilikeaboutuover 13 years ago
This is gonna be sooo good!

I love when two very strong leads interact. I can't wait to read more. Thank you so much for a promising asian male-black female romance. I love it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I agree

with whatilikeaboutu, this is going to be soo good and I'm glad you did AM/BW, i'm trying to write one myself, except Korean is my Asian of choice. So this will be helpful to me, thank you so much and this does look so promising and gooooood!

MabelCinnamonMabelCinnamonover 13 years ago
I love it!!!

I love the context and the characters... I'm looking forward to reading more!!!

mdalexandermdalexanderover 13 years ago
Give me more!

I absolutely loved it! I want some more. I really like the plot development. The dialogue between the characters is snappy and witty.

willing2explorewilling2exploreover 13 years ago
Amazing!

That was wonderful!! I am very excited for the next update. These two should make for a very interesting plot. I have to say though when the story began I was thinking they were in college lol my bad

honeybreehoneybreeover 13 years ago
Great start so far...

The plot and the characters seem promising and can't wait for more to come with these two.

LadyTwilightLadyTwilightover 13 years ago
AWSOME

i love ambw stories. you are doing a great job. im soo excited for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Really great!

Can't wait for the next chapter.

InkMyChinaInkMyChinaover 13 years agoAuthor
Oh guys

Thanks so much I'm working on the first chapter I'm trying to make it good.

Loca85Loca85over 13 years ago
5 stars

The only thing I didn't like was that it's pretty impossible to mistake a frappuccino for a coffee. They look nothing alike and one is cold and the other is hot. But other than that, I can't wait for more chapters.

ColorofLoveColorofLoveover 13 years ago
Really good beginning

really got a good feel for both characters, can't wait to see how thier relationship progresses.

sweetjanielsweetjanielover 13 years ago
OMG!!!!

I love this story. I can totally relate!!!!

whatilikeaboutuwhatilikeaboutuover 13 years ago
will this really good story

ever have a second chapter?

InkMyChinaInkMyChinaover 13 years agoAuthor
I'm so sorry guys

I've been more busy than ever but I promise I'm working on chapter 1

InkMyChinaInkMyChinaover 13 years agoAuthor
And

Oh

Sorry about that I don't drink either haha.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Yay.

i cant wait. i just finished reading something and accidentally clicked this...sooooo happy i did :] i normally wait till they are finished but this sounds too good i hope you bring the first ch. very soon :]

ladyshyladyshyover 13 years ago
part 2

when's it coming

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
love it

i love and need more stat. you have a great story going and i'm waiting 4 ur next update.

BronzeaphroditeBronzeaphroditeabout 13 years ago
Stumbled on a Gem here..

Keep on writing it's fantastic!

TalyniaTalyniaover 11 years ago

Interesting. I'm not 100% sure how I feel about either character so far. I think there is too much emphasis on how 'bad' they are. Still a good story and I wish there was more to read.

aylissa_cumsaylissa_cumsover 10 years ago
please finish

Please finish, this story piqued my interested.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More!

Please!

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