All Comments on 'Al, Art, Ralph, Part 3'

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CrazyDaveTrucker60CrazyDaveTrucker604 months ago

What happened to parts 1 and 2? Interesting story.

jackie43jackie434 months agoAuthor

Parts 1 and 2 were published as independent and stand-alone stories: Mother-In-Law Apartment and Starting Over. My apologies for the inconvenience!

nyc1975nyc19753 months ago

Was this a conclusion? Don't you think your MC deserves closure and vindication ?

nyc1975nyc19753 months ago

Was this supposed to be a conclusion? Please give your MC some closure and vindication.

jackie43jackie433 months agoAuthor

There are more parts already written. They just need a little fine tuning. I try to reduce typos and grammatical errors to a minimum.

hindsight2020hindsight20202 months ago

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The story did not move forward in this chapter.

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