by lbenton
As much as many people hate this kind of story. This is amazing and the writing style and the skill shown is amazing. Cannot wait for the next instalment and I just love it! Looking forwards to future works!
Excellent writing! The story holds you captive. Look forward to more. Well done.
Editors Review
Review:
This has been my favorite story thus far. Lee clearly knows how to write erotically and make the act of sex sound so appealing on paper, but he also writes from a woman’s perspective with total accuracy. It’s rare that male writers understand what goes through a woman’s mind, most erotica tends to be from the male perspective. This, however, was so well-written, and as a woman I loved reading how much Amanda was enjoying being taken and objectified. It’s a fantasy many women have, you wouldn’t believe it but it’s true.
Tapiey13
and it's particularly interesting that some women commentators believe they speak for all women. guess that means all women don't really believe in fidelity, have little self discipline, and believe that any sensual desire they may have supersedes any assumption of faithfulness by their husbands. in comparison to many other stories of this nature, and on this site, the story is poorly done.
I never understand the "oh I am ever so upset that the slut wife I encouraged to be a whore was actually a whore however will I recover from getting EXACTLY what I said I wanted" mentality
I messed up and read part two first, while reading I thought this looks familiar. found part one and thought this was the story I had read, nope some one is copying someone else
I do know that sexual abuse by blackmail in Alaska is 10-25 years in the penitentiary.
Is this really written by Ibenton? It's like reading a catalogue about women and Alaska/snow written by a teenager without experience of neither. Really poor...
My question was how the men could let Amanda and her husband go home. They'd have to kill them and feed the bodies to the bears. 2 stars
The writing doesnt seem to be this author's, it has a juvenile tone to it, like a young inexperienced writer. Lots of holes, ie what did Rodger do the entire week, never fuck his wife at night? How was he feeling at what was going on?
To call this story garbage would be a slight to landfills everywhere! Yet what else can one call it? Well, there is trash, detritus, refuse, offal, debris, scum...well most will get the point. I backtracked to read this because the following chapters were posted (erroneously I presume) in Loving Wives. Just a waste. 1⭐ - TANSTAAFL
The usual chronic complainers come 'round to call the author names and discourage him from writing.
Real smart, guys. You won't be happy until you drive every author away.
Isn't it fun to watch that the idiots don't want to become extinct? Neither in reality nor in fantasy are they to be found dead. This author and his story prove it to us again!
What a fucked up story. People actually get off on this shit? No score, no NOT ONE.
This is my favorite kind of predicament story. Wife brought along on a camping or other type of trip and the guides vreste a predicament and take advantage of the wife.
And i will NEVER EVER understand why people read non consent stories and then complain about them. Go read about rape and murder in the Bible. Stay off of sex sites.