All Comments on 'Alena's Game Ch. 13'

Si han decidido que ella tomará el control total, ella tendría que haber pagado la cuenta del restaurante, ella tiene que controlar su dinero y ella conduce el coche como acción de poder total.

Another great chapter. It's just too bad that he made a bad choice to be a full time slaved. Please keep writing on this story..

"The pain was constant, all consuming, but I couldn't move, bound in place by the twin shackles of agony and ecstasy, as I pumped and pumped my seed into my wife."

Outstanding!

2 idiots.

You must have done some serious research. Just a tad demented. I know now that there’s no redemption for Quinn. She will debase him until he longer serves any useful purpose. At that point I guess she’ll just give him away if she hasn’t done so. I think I’ll skim the rest . Alena is the epitome of evil. To take pride and pleasure, well more to say. the physical equipment could be removed by any doctor.

Man it’s weird to me that all these commenters are so negative. It’s a fucking hot fantasy. And yeah it’s dark. I’m here for that.Keep going.

Wow, just wow,

Ok, we’re thirteen chapters into this and already broken two pants zippers. You’ve got the intellectual warped mind for a slam bang ending. Don’t choke on us in the home stretch! Nothing like he made it with Cassie, his whangdangdoodle shorted out, and electrocuted both of them, plunging the city into darkness…

This story is fantastic. Thank you for it.

Great story. I enjoy the angst of a sub agreeing to something they don't necessarily like, but need. That, and doing it for their Dom, despite what they are put through. Things like contracts and longterm agreements that can't be recinded always intrigue me, especially when they can still function as a normal couple day to day, yet that agreement and is always there in the background to add excitement. Thank you, I'm looking forward to more.

Such a depraved story, and I'm here for it!

Time for her to cuckold him and have him eat out her lover's creampie, while he's tied down..

the best story I have read in femdom (second is Tomtame "I have an idea"

Wow, thanks...!

Bold of her to assume that’s she’s actually talking to other women on “forums” and not just horny teens from 4chan

Let’s hope this wimp actually beats the living shit out of this harridan.

This was not my favorite of the chapters, but in a series filled with home runs, a triple is nice once in a while.

I don't know that any new ground was broken here but I do wonder about the toys and technology. Does such a tens unit exist that could be triggered in the manner shown here? Again, why be critical of a wonderful fantasy. I look forward to chapter 12.

My goodness, what idiotic nonsense. He goes to the police and she goes to prison for a long time. Have you become so degenerate in your perversion and addiction to stories that you can masturbate to that even the biggest shit ? Even as a fantasy, this story is so idiotic that it has no connection to reality. So it's a fairy tale. I didn't know you were so passionate about fairy tales.