Alena's Game Ch. 17

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Quinn made a grasping motion with his hands, lost in the memory.

"Some people never see that in their entire lives, but we did. At least we had it, just that one brief moment. That night will stay with me until my last breath."

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[Next, the final chapter: a neat little epilogue to Cassie's clinical notes leaves her shocked at Quinn's last confession.

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goodwabgoodwab4 months ago

I had to read this story over and over again before I finally understood. It's really about unconditional love. If Alena wants it and it gives her pleasure, he will accept it -- whatever it is -- and support her, even at the expense of his own feelings and dignity.

This story struck so many chords in me from my own life. It reminded me that millions and millions of people live in some form of D/s relationship but don't even know it.

I am not involved in BD/DS/SM, but I see why the lifestyle has to exist.

Is there anything more difficult than living consciously? Kudos to this brave and demanding author.

AmbulAmbul4 months ago

Two very real people in such an intense relationship that it hurts them both. incredible story-telling.

HeartfeltmanHeartfeltman7 months ago

This chapter covered another pivotal point in the evolution of this marriage. Perhaps the most important step among many. I have been in awe of this writer since paragraph one and this chapter demonstrates why. This may be a fantasy for many men seeking a female-led relationship, and it's extreme levels of control cater to those who have such a fetish, but this is a story with a true sense of the lifestyle and all the emotional baggage that comes with it. This story actually has something to say and I've been deeply moved by what's been shared here.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

the best

SirtofawnSirtofawnover 1 year ago

Great story. The fact some don't "get it" or understand the dynamic is proof of the depth of the characters. It's not a simple relationship, there's a lot to unoack, and that is what makes it a great read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Since Cassie knows Quinn will never be right ever again, she should turn him over to the club to use him every night..

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What an incredible love story… After reading the last 2 chapters, I had to go back and re-read the entire story. Whiplash. Total 180 from Chapter 1. An amazing and thoughtful (and deceptive non-con) story. Oneagainst, you are an incredibly gifted story teller and a really sneaky “plot-er”. Very well done, and I am so looking forward to the conclusion.

Keep writing.. you have a gift!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I wonder if Cassie has any understanding of how much Quinn gave up to live his fantasy

KidshouseKidshouseover 1 year ago

so good but the last part is not on here it is a shame as i would of liked to of found out the ending

lamb2001lamb2001over 1 year ago

Thank you oneagainst, for taking us on such an impressive and erotic journey. (I never understand all the anonymous complainers to femdom stories. Why would anyone read such an extensive story, if they don’t enjoy this type of dynamic? Just to complain? Or perhaps, it hits them uncomfortably close to home.) Anyway, you clearly put a huge amount of thought and work into this, and I appreciate how you put an intense D/S relationship within a detailed realistic context. That’s not easy to do! I found the way Quinn and Cassie wrestled with their feelings to be intriguing. And her growing sense of her own sexual power was really hot. Again, thank you for a great ride!)

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