All Comments on 'Alex - 10 Days of Torment Ch. 14'

Thanks for the next chapter!

5 Stars!

Neil - Thanks for taking my advice. Having the Spanish sections translated into English in brackets made the chapter much easier to read. I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes from here.

great to see this story back on track and looking forward to the rest

Brandi in particular but also Gerard are truly evil. Maybe someday Christina will figure that out, but for right now she just follows them deeper down the rabbit hole. She will probably destroy Alex in the process.

I enjoyed the first couple of chapters of this series the most. I think that's because (in cuckolding fiction especially) anticipation combined with a sense of progression is hugely important. It's wild to read about what the wife might do, and what she'll do after x, etc. Unfortunately, the decision to start at the midpoint or beyond, and then back up to the beginning kind of ruins that sense of progression. Just a little bit of unsolicited advice, and I'm sorry if it's unwelcome!

Hoping to see the next couple of episode published soon, its been a long wait

That was a bit anticlimactic. Virtually everything that happened to Christina was off stage, one of my pet peeves in erotica.

Mimaster - are you going to continue the story or is it over. Give us a status please.

Struggled with this chapter.