by mimaster
Another great chapter, but like another comment, the story is more than strong enough to continue with a minor mention of the kids. The over 18s can play like rabbits, but the younger ones need protection which would make more sense, especially if the main person is a lawyer. That's my small view can't wait for chapter 22
Excellent chapter! I love how Maggie put the pedal to the metal when it came to dominating Alex. He shouldn't complain too much about being called "Alexis". It could be worse: Maggie could settle on the cuter "Lexi" as his new nickname.
I have to wonder if Maggie will soon be calling the shots at home and at the office. She doesn't have a law degree, but I'm sure it wouldn't be too tough to nudge Alex into acting a bit more like he's *her* secretary, at least in private.
What makes this story so good is not just the story line but also the fact that it has so many characters which makes it more complex than most stories on the site. I too could do without the kids being too much exposed to "feeling sexy" but that is my only complaint. I could see this having at least as many chapters again with the large cast. Look forward to more. Thanks.
Loving this story. I can't wait for the next chapter. You are such a good writer.
With power hungry women like the three main ones in. His life, who needs enemies?