All Comments on 'Alex - 10 Days of Torment Ch. 25'

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CZOFTWCZOFTWabout 2 years ago

Good story and well written, my only criticism is that so many of the sexual encounters are glossed over. For such a long story, there are very few blow by blow sexual encounters. Most are sort of: detailed build up... "and then they fucked", she cleans up, end scene. Kind of anticlimactic - literally

Tot74Tot74about 2 years ago

Fantastic story and plot one of my favorites. Good job. 🙂

CrosfyreCrosfyreabout 2 years ago

Fascinated to see where it goes and especially if mixmaster sticks the landing at the end.

- Christina & Alex - be careful what you wish for!

- How is the drug addiction going to be fixed (or not) - cocaine already, likely heroin next? She is taking a LOT of cocaine daily which will have effected her brain

- Likely STD's from randomly screwing anything & everything?

- Likely pregnancy from unprotected sex (as per Brandi's plan)

- Relationship evolution between Christina & Alex after the "10 days"

- How far will Brandi's plan get to fruition?

- Will Brandi and/or Gerard be around after Vegas?

- Will Christina's family & friend's "rescue team" save her before the "10 days" are over?

- Christina's physical & mental evolution - tattoos, hair, attitude, hotwife, prostitute. What will she be like after? During this chapter she has bought into Brandi's plan although currently unaware of Brandi's conclusion with baby, etc.

Bring on the next chapter!

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Updated 12/27/23: Hello again readers. As I stated in the previous update, writing has resumed, along with some editing. I'm currently writing chapter 30 of Betsy. Once I get done with that this week, I need to write at least two chapters of Ann that I've charted so as not los...