by mimaster
Good story and well written, my only criticism is that so many of the sexual encounters are glossed over. For such a long story, there are very few blow by blow sexual encounters. Most are sort of: detailed build up... "and then they fucked", she cleans up, end scene. Kind of anticlimactic - literally
Fascinated to see where it goes and especially if mixmaster sticks the landing at the end.
- Christina & Alex - be careful what you wish for!
- How is the drug addiction going to be fixed (or not) - cocaine already, likely heroin next? She is taking a LOT of cocaine daily which will have effected her brain
- Likely STD's from randomly screwing anything & everything?
- Likely pregnancy from unprotected sex (as per Brandi's plan)
- Relationship evolution between Christina & Alex after the "10 days"
- How far will Brandi's plan get to fruition?
- Will Brandi and/or Gerard be around after Vegas?
- Will Christina's family & friend's "rescue team" save her before the "10 days" are over?
- Christina's physical & mental evolution - tattoos, hair, attitude, hotwife, prostitute. What will she be like after? During this chapter she has bought into Brandi's plan although currently unaware of Brandi's conclusion with baby, etc.
Bring on the next chapter!