All Comments on 'Alex'

Um we didn't even get an introduction of the characters, how they look, nothing. I felt like I came in on the middle of the story. Try giving a little background info.

That was a QUICKIE!

I agree with the other comment. There was no introduction of the characters. How they meet or even the background.

I'm still very very new to writing, this is only my second story. I appreciate any and all feedback on how to improve!

I hear BBWs have very tight pussies