All Comments on 'Alex for Her and Alexa for Him Pt. 01'

To the rescue, saving the damsel in distress. Nothing like fantastic oral to please a woman; especially a woman whose regular lover fails in oral!

Lots of typos and punctuation foibles that should have been picked-up during the Proof Reading.

I have seen a suggestion, here on literotica.com, that the story be recorded, then played back as the Proof Reading is done. This is a great idea as punctuation is also identified in this exercise. If the reader pauses, punctuate.

HOT HOT HOT!!! Can’t wait to see where this is going. (as if by the total and intro I don’t)