All Comments on 'Alexander Ch. 01'

I rarely read mind control stories as they're generally sugar coated. Good to see one that's 'realistic.'

If his victim does remember something, he neglected to tell her not to shoot him....

Just a rehash of a familiar story line that's been done dozens, if not hundreds of times, and better. Mcstories.com is full of these, all of which have more heat to them than this weak imitation.

Waiting on the next chapter, good start to what should become an awesome story written in a good way and not as a bad guy misusing the power he holds

Gloriously wicked. Where to go from here? Will Alexander be able to turn the ring of control to good or will the evil side of the ring take control of Alexander? Oh, how exciting!!!

I enjoyed it and hope you keep writing

Great promise.

Good start. Let’s see where it goes.