All Comments on 'Alice Dines Out Ch. 02'

Kick her to the curb!

3

Writing is good. Can’t complain but fuck me, Alice would do my head in. Some women are just born sluts and while I’ve fucked many of them, living with them is just too intense. You’d need to overdose on seratonin supplements to keep up with the anxiety she would bring to any relationship. Once the thrill wears off and the inevitable chasing of the next high increases the intensity until it’s just full blown disrespect and then divorce.

Story makes no sense, and there can be none. Fucking 3 men in a public pavilion?

Story is not my style.

I enjoyed it. Ignore detractors. Haters hate because they can't write.

Alice is a real handful. Frustrating, exasperating, but makes life intense. Life with her would never be mundane. I like Alice a lot and will read her other stories.

5-stars!

It takes a deft hand (and other parts) to write a story with this level of balance. A very modern take on "The Taming of the Shrew" with a good bit of character development perfectly entwined with the plot progression. The teasing, the expectation, the real human reactions to crazy actions... this is a great story!

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