All Comments on 'Alice In La La Land'

by IJS0904

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Only_connectOnly_connectover 3 years ago

Great fun! A bit more detail on Stacy's methods of trim checking wouldn't go amiss (if it's possible without detracting from the lively pace of the story).

tkarddetkarddeover 3 years ago
Awesome tale!

What a great retelling of an age old story! You have a great imagination and spin a very entertaining tale. I have thoroughly enjoyed your fairy tales and look forward to many more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I like this story a lot! Please write some part 2! I would love to read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

yes very good. Perhaps goldilocks or snow white and the seven dwarfs could be next

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You will find that nearly all, but not all, of my stories have a common denominator. I want my characters to be joyful in life. I want them to be happy. If stretching sexual boundaries does that for them, it is fine with me. It's just sex, after all.