by IJS0904
Great fun! A bit more detail on Stacy's methods of trim checking wouldn't go amiss (if it's possible without detracting from the lively pace of the story).
What a great retelling of an age old story! You have a great imagination and spin a very entertaining tale. I have thoroughly enjoyed your fairy tales and look forward to many more!
yes very good. Perhaps goldilocks or snow white and the seven dwarfs could be next