All Comments on 'Alice Pt. 01'

Really good first chapter. I am kind of taken back with no corner time afterwards, but see the need for Caroline to be alone in her "thoughts". It also appears by Caroline telling Helen when she did something wrong that she will probably tell Helen about this, if so poor Alice. again good job can't wait to see where this all heads.

Pappasleaze!

Thanks for the comment. All I can say is 'Patience!'. Events of all sorts will unfold over several chapters!