All Comments on 'Alice Pt. 02 - Caroline'

I was kind of hoping A;ice would get back early and at least see the last stroke. I do think after all spankings one should have coner time to help reflect on why they are standing in the corner red butt exposed. good job here can't wait to see what happens next.

Pappasleaze!

I read the first 2 parts of the story and it's well written and easy to read if not a little short. I normally don't like BDSM but give all new authors a chance. Even though Helen and Caroline have an agreement it would seem, Alice doesn't. She may have been aware of the house rules and that there may be consequences but not what they may be. Without consent she was assaulted. Since she hasn't brought it up I guess she doesn't care or is just worried more about losing her place to stay. I hope your going to dig down deeper into these characters.

Agreeing with Anonymous- I was hoping Alice would catch the last stroke too.

But it's a promising beginning with lots of possibilities. I look forward to more.

Very enjoyable.