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by mjar65

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lc69hunterlc69hunterover 1 year ago

love the lead up. Can't wait for the next chapter

lc69hunterlc69hunterover 1 year ago

love the lead up. Can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Enjoyable read - keen to see how you develop this. Watch the names: Ivy became Alice at one point.

cmj711cmj711about 1 year ago

Nice change to have the woman wanting to watch her man fuck another woman.

I'd like to see her make him fuck Ivy without cumming inside of her. Teach him to please her, teach him to edge...

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Good premise.

But barely a beginning.

Stops so abruptly with nothing yet 'having happened'.

And the ass fucking not only came out of nowhere as an immediate need, but lacked any of the preparation for what had been previously too big a cock -- even with all the preparation in the world.

Three stars.

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